miércoles, 2 de mayo de 2012

Color Poem



Color Poem

Marlboro Blue- Benjamin Moore HC-153
Roger Guizado

The spring sky over Miami
The coldish blue raindrops falling down
The blue makes me feel that am free

The icy cubes are being formed in the freezer
The small blue blossoms were beginning to grow
Blue as the icebergs of Alaska
The blue makes me feel that am free

Is like being in the top of the Mountain and see the airspace
It is like having the whole sky in your hands
Is like having freedom in your hands
The Marlboro Blue makes people feel happy
And be full of joy
The blue makes me feel that am free


1 comentario:

  1. Good beginning.

    You have no alliteration, or refrain. please revise.
    You need to post the color under the name and number
    When you comment about someone's post, you write on their post.
    The link that you put for middlemindz has to take you to the post not just the blog.

    YOU NEED TO MOVE YOUR WORD VERIFICATION!

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